Impromptu Haiku

M-W’s Word of the Day:  IMPROMPTU
Fandango’s One-Word Challenge:  MELODY

My response: Two impromptu senryu

I said the thing
impromptu  a crack appeared
I felt the shards

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bits of a melody
prompted by the memory
what once was

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