Winter Morning 2

winter morning
the lumpy bed holds you
too long

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6 thoughts on “Winter Morning 2

  1. winter morning
    the lumpy bed holds you
    too long

    Christine Goodnough

    One of your best!

    Well considered enjambment over lines two and three, and the verb, adjective, and ‘too long’ lift this!

    Alan Summers
    Call of the Page

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